Angel of Death

Hey there! It was the day and it was dreadful day. This could be a great hook, but the repetition of the word 'day' messes everything up. Sometimes it's easy ...

Hey Holly! Wow, this was really really beautiful. But while I grew, the world grew. I watched the clouds—with their soft chameleon underbellies—crawl up the sky, day after day. And ...

Hey Kamas! First off, this was really really beautiful. It's catchy and I can see this being a nursery rhyme or something. It's sad but hey, look at Ring Around ...

Hello Ky! Haven't read anything by you in a while. The Elephant Keeper! Is this a sequel to The Elephant Boy? If it is, shame on you for not telling ...

Hello there! Welcome to YWS, I'm Angel of Death, but please call me Angel. First off, polls are not a good way to attract readers. People usually see them and ...

Hallo Ash! So glad to be reading this chapter! I didn't read the review before mine, so sorry if I repeat anything. My attempt at nonchalance was wasted. It was ...

Hey Sunny! First off, I have to say that I love the title. It reminds me of one of my favorite songs by Dashboard Confessional. The trees whispered to each ...

Hey there! I'm Angel of Death, but please call me Angel. I don't think I've seen you around here, so welcome to YWS!! IT WAS THE FIRST TIME I SAW ...

'Ello there, Mandorelute! Haven't seen you around here, so you must be new. If you aren't, then I apologize but Welcome to YWS. I'm Angel of Death but please just ...

Hey KJ!!! I don't really have a long nit-picky review today. This was really good. And I really like Wren (which you already know.) Her instincts and the way she ...

Hey KJ! I didn't read the other reviews, but hopefully this one will be helpful. I apologize if I repeat anything! The blood on the floor continued to flow down ...

Hello again! Well, I didn't find anything to nitpick over in this chapter. It's always sad to hear that Becca and Vick's relationship isn't working out. I hope to hear ...

Hey KJ! I thought I'd get these two reviews over with before I hid over to look at The Experiment! I'm so happy to read more of this! Alright, 'nough ...

Hello Ash! I purposely ignored everyone else's comments. I want what happens to be a surprise, so I apologize if I repeat anything they said. His smile was wide in ...

Hey Ky, It's seems like it's been a REALLY long time, since I've read anything of yours. I did not read anything that Hannah said, so I apologize if I ...